Black Poetry : 8 days, 37 minutes, and 1 second

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  1. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's been 8 days, 37 minutes, and 1 second and you still haven't called me
    I thought by now you would have surely wised up and begged to be back with me
    I mean after all you were the one who cheated on ME
    Had a baby with another girl and never told me
    Especially after you asked me
    "Will you marry me?"

    Yet I look at my clock and now it's be 8 days, 37 minutes, and 10 seconds and I'm going insane
    Because I look back and I remember not too long ago when you used to be the prefect man
    And
    I sit and reminise when we had our first baby
    Oooo how happy you were when I stepped out the car with our baby in my hands
    And you promised, no you VOWED, that you would always do right by me and
    Never cheat on me

    But yet I look at the other clock in the kitchen and it's been 8 days, 37 mintues, and 26 seconds and you still haven't turned the lock to our front door
    I guess it's real this time, it's not a game, you really don't want me anymore
    You don't care about me anymore and you definitely don't give a d*mn about our baby anymore
    Cuz it's been 8 days, 37 minutes, and 39 seconds and you have yet ..........

    Oh wait, there's something outside....it sounds like you
    (walking over to the window, can't wait to curse at you)
    But it's not you
    It was just someone passing by my front window...not you
    It's been 8 days, 37 minutes, and 46 minutes exactly and I still haven't seen you........
    I miss you.............
     
  2. ibrahim

    ibrahim Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Boy oh boy...i love this foxy
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    love the flo on this one flow on poet.:star:
     
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    De Ja Vu
    Didnt I just repond to this
    I wish I had read this one before the
    Last any who keep it coming poet
    Darn Men LoL
    Much love Sister
     
  5. attitude06

    attitude06 New Member MEMBER

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    love this poem dis remind me of that mary j blige song family affair i can relate to this.
     
  6. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i loved this...
     
  7. Negro Harmony

    Negro Harmony Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i liked this poem it was meaningful.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    My My My !
    each day that past through da minutes on that second one was bandit
    this was one awesome piece sis , u go gurl !!!!!!
     
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    Splendid!!
     
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