Black Poetry : 8,3,1

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  1. nadea

    nadea Active Member MEMBER

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    You told me that you loved me.
    You spent 3 1/2 years of your
    life with me.
    You asked me to be the mother
    of your children.
    And then you called me
    a liar to my face.
    Apparently the 8 letters
    for the 3 words
    don't have 1 meaning.
    Apparently to you it means
    waste 3 years of your
    life with someone that you never
    even began to trust.

    And YOU, you told me that
    you loved me.
    Told me that you were
    in love with me.
    That you never felt
    this strongly for anyone ever.
    And then you changed your mind.
    Apparently the 8 letters
    for the 3 words with
    the 1 meaning is a joke to you.
    Apparently you should be allowed
    to just change your mind.

    And you told me that you loved me.

    It was you who hurt me the most.
    I felt like my spirit had been
    ripped out by you.
    I felt like my spirit had been
    ripped out, balled up and thrown
    in the trash by you.

    You, who should be allowed
    to just change your mind
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like this alot...
     
  3. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I liked this:)
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed this was heated vibe
    tell it like it is and work it !
    i like dis here......tyteeeeeeeee!!
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow..ilike this sort of deep
     
  6. Royal_T

    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm copying everyone else. I like this to...the breakdown 8,3,1 was tyte.
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahhhh much love to you
    feeling you on this
    seriously
    Peace
     
  8. eternal

    eternal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ahh....somebody knows what that is like!! I know how that is, sometimes I feel like I am on the verge of that one!!
    Dayum good!
    Eternal
     
  9. nadea

    nadea Active Member MEMBER

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    Appreciation is...

    The smile I have on my face right now
    and the love and support I feel in my heart.

    Thank you all.
     
  10. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    8 3 1...
    good concept
    and tyte scribe...
    peace
    khasm