Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GYPSYMAN, Apr 30, 2002.
wow...g-man this piece is really deep. i have read it twice, now. i always love the way you bring it to the table and also, lovin' your word usage in this piece.
Gypsyman --- Your imagery and flow pulled me headlong into your vision and your truth.
A skillful word tapestry that moved me on two levels--
1) the subject and content challenged to think beyond the mindless manipulation we know as the media soundbite
2) the craft and complexity you exhibited as a writer challenged me never to settle for the poetically obvious in my own writing.
Beautiful economy of language, gypsyman.
Not one superfluous or wasted word. Much respect.
THAT WAS AN ILLUMINATING PIECE!
This piece stings to the marrow with visual conviction.
It is structured to demand and command attention and
it does. It is soooooooooo goooooooooood!
I know that is so lame to say...but I won't muddy the
water with"superfulous" words.
BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!
Msluciousb, are you makin' fun of my vo-ka-bew-le-ry?
I'm with you my sister, $10 words aside, this poem was just soooooo goooood!
Peace and blessings,
as one who works for the media madness, all i can say is you hit it up with this...
Thanks for the input peeps..this piece signifies my journey into a different style stronger in symbolism versus straight forward lyrical flip...so I really appreciate the feedback from you all.
this was very thought provoking and I feel you, and thank you for speaking on the things we often fail to question.
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