Black Poetry : 7 th day

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LibertyLady, May 10, 2004.

  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There is sumthing about that day
    the way it lays..
    and moves...
    shoots smooth..
    Yellow green brown bleu..
    besides the religius vieuw..
    it carry,s you cool.
    Time for church famaly friends events...
    on this day the week ends and after it
    another one begins...
    Wake up besides a strangers face...
    "'maybe i see you next week ?''
    Wood walks beach....
    breath..
    Stay...

    relax in bed...

    Her sunny day ..
    even when it rains...
    dark or bright we embrasse...

    There is sumthing about Sunday....

    maybe its because on this day...







    sumthing ....







    began..

     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel much calmness when I read this piece...kinda like a wave of freshness.
     
  3. PurpleMoons

    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    Yes, This is so
    uplifting and
    inspiring.
    Loved the energy
    flowing through
    this piece!
    Great drop!
     
  4. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice piece, serine and fresh
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    THE WARMTH I FELT FROM DIS WAS SWEET CARESSIN
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, this sure was like a breath of fresh air.
     
  7. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes..sister there is something about that day

    Beautiful Peace...
     
  8. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lord knows that if he didn't tell us to rest after 6 days of work we would not.
    this was very smoooth
     
  9. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks all :heart:


    and make shure ya,ll relax and take youre rest....











    Love Libertyflowerlimn :heart:
     
  10. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh, this is real. i like this. It was very powerful. Nice drop.