Black Poetry : 69 InToxicated

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Intoxicated by your voice of words
    that lingers in my mental as slavery
    my heart lash out in hope and savior

    I can forget my very own existence
    in da depth of your slimmering slushy kiss
    i've seen us bend sixtynine wayz
    in a rapture so slutry and kind

    My body hunger for ye thy queeneth
    as i limbo way beyond reasons
    only your face i sooth see in
    and your eyes dat understand my beings

    U have me under such intoxic spill
    in thy arms of will i lay still under thy breast
    hold me one more time so i may smile again
    i'm so intoxicated in 69 wayz of lovin u .
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To be intoxicated under someone's spell, what a way to be taken. This was a lovely write Rich.
     
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    often if one's love enters it can be intoxicated and endearing wholesome
    yes what a way to be taken ! ...........
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    you went from

    in - extinguish - able

    to 69 lol hahahahahha

    playa playa

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    mixing up da crunk juices ya know !
     
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    Well now, I could think of 70 ways but ...hmmmm somehow... 69 looks and sounds better:love:
    Great piece poet.
     
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    Thank u sista for da visit and yep i know of 71 but six-nine just fit in so nicely....lol
     
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