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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by UbZoRbShUn, Apr 3, 2001.

  1. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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  2. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I was there
    and you were here
    I comforted you in the night
    and calmed your fear

    but now in this life we are in another place
    our past separted by time and space
    yet bound together for all eternity
    is my soul tied to thee.
     
  3. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tell it, ma...

    So much depth in this piece, I had to reread it and, then, reread it again :laugh:, and it was, thoroughly, felt with each read. You're on fire, poetess...:hot:
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes Zorb,

    Excellent flow Queen!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ZORBSHUN...

    my perfectly poetic sister...

    i like you and bishop are feelin' dis one...

    you know i've always loved your flow!! :)

    AlwaysLove...
    Sunshyne~
     
  6. 8th wonder

    8th wonder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lov'n the flow of this piece sis... nice!

    8th!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    VERY WELL SPOKEN U LAID OUT
    A LIFE TYME OF YESTERYEARS IN
    TODAY'S FUTURE......I FEEL YA SIS.
     
  8. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    Go 'head Go 'head Go 'head!!!!!

    i love this!!!!

    simply luv'n this flow!!!

    :heart:

    Destee