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  1. GYPSYMAN

    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man G.......

    i don't have a clue
    of dis death u looking 4
    who take lives and a lot more

    but i tell u dis u came wit dis tyght
    fright life of death
    ya on da mark and all prayer out
    to da death game of life
    i'm bout speechless .........do keep bringing da reality:eek:
     
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    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Peace Rich

    Much love Rich, for your thoughts on this one.

    g-man
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    GYPS.

    man dis one is deep
    a nameless thing call death
    day
    night
    taking young to soon
    creeps inside ya room
    it don't have any respect
    will come to all dis u can bet!
    very very very deep piece....:eek:
     
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    This is...

    ...stirring so many
    emotions. Bringing
    back so many memories
    of losses I had to
    endure, and I know
    that I was never the
    only one to lose
    someone, but at
    those moments I
    always felt as though
    noone could possibly
    imagin my pain, let
    alone hurt as much as
    I hurt, you know,
    so I felt this one deep
    down within myself...
     
  6. Cyndi

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    Amazing poetry!


    Born from mother,
    Born from life,
    Born from God.

    Like the egg,
    Like the caterpillar,
    Like the chrysalis,
    Like the butterfly.

    We all live,
    We all transform,
    We all die.

    Someone will cry.
    Someone will scream.
    Someone will remember.

    You'll be alive.
    You'll be immortal.
    You'll be a memory.

    Memories live.
    Memories breathe.
    Memories never die.
     
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    Archival Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ****

    This is, wow.

    Your right, lets give this death bastard some of his own. I've seen too many people who's lives he's destroyed, he's overdue some punishment. Get the name, I'm with ya.

    Tight.
    --Archival
     
  8. Cyndi

    Cyndi Member MEMBER

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    Death isn't always a bad thing. When it comes unexpectedly, yes, it's horrible and it hurts. When it comes after a long illness, it still hurts, but you have time to say goodbye and watch whoever is suffering finally see peace.

    And regardless of how we die...depending on who we are, we all wind up in the arms of God. I can't think of a better place to be, myself. Although I don't look forward to leaving this world, I do look forward to seeing my Grandma and Grandpa again. I also look forward to the chance to give Jesus a great big bear hug and thank Him for saving us all. ^_^
     
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    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is real. i like the whole flow.


    peace and blessings

    sean
    :nuts:
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Like Whoa!

    Dog you definitely capture emotion in this joynt hea! Im Lovin it!

    Much Respect
    Reas