Black Poetry : 6 Millimeters

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  1. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    6 millimeters of risk,
    Stupidity, and lust,
    My womb is carrying
    6 millimeters of US
    6 millimeters of pleasure,
    Passion marks, and pain
    6 millimeters of a child that I’m gonna name
    6 millimeters of semen,
    My egg, and a destination
    6 millimeters of a love that’s already taken
    What can I do?
    Too late to think that
    Too late to go back
    Too late to react
    But despite what you think
    Despite what you yell
    It ain’t gone change a thing
    Damien
    You can just go right to hell
    This baby’s yours
    From sun up to sun out
    No doubt in my mind
    Your seed is livin in my pouch
    My baby, our baby
    Your seed, my love
    When you get up on top of a woman
    This is what it does
    6 millimeters of sweat,
    name calling, and heat
    6 millimeters of lil hands and small feet
    6 millimeters of you riding,
    from the back, and me on top
    6 millimeters of me yellin
    Please baby don’t stop
    6 millimeters of sensitivity
    goodbyes, and disgust
    But no matter how you say it baby
    It’s 6 millimeters of US

    So don’t ask me what I’m gone do….
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow, you took your feelings, made a fist and packed a powerful punch. I loved the way you layed this down, in specifics, because any time you lay with someone, this can happen. And many don't think about it, amid the pleasure of it, until well, you have 6 millimeters. Take a bow, well thought out and expressed.
     
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    wow the way this is posed is excellent...6 millimeters i likes...way to release your emotions I hear ya girl
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful poem...I just loved it and it made me feel good to know that there are still some that has their head on right...thanks for sharing this with us.
     
  5. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you ladies. Just wanted to be heard...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow !! well heard this pack awesome power
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks... :blush:
     
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    whoa....

    girl! you know you laid it out for him....wow, this was just so powerful...I really missed your writin
     
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    whoa...is about all I can say

    whoa...

    whoa...

    whoa...

    powerful peace...
     
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    this has me totally taken back...
    wow...aint that the truth...
    it's a shame catz act like this at times....smh
    tyte scribe
    one love
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