Black Poetry : ................................

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    within da picture i saw da smiles and heart through da slumbering eyez i saw
    tears welling like oceans da pain yes if our faces are shown in depth the many
    expression the impression left would be a maze ......the wonders we see in a
    pictured face.

    awesome view painted sis you took me there.
     
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    The wonders indeed Brother Rich. I appreciate your poetic response, glad it took you there, humbled am I, thank you.
     
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    yes.....with my eyez through yours i see what u see
     
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    you put is so well poet

    i think we wear that face already though don't you think?

    i don't think it's a matter of what if

    i think it already is

    the impression

    the imprint of reality somehow is present

    :SuN017:
     
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    Smiles linger on faces, from tender touches,
    caresses, and embraces placed upon skin
    Names are etched in gold upon tongues,
    upon thoughts... from cherished memories kept within

    now that is poetry....
    very nice watz...the pic added a completion...

    one love
    khasm
     
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    traces...

    indelibly etched across lasting spaces...as the faces of each season run its course...its touch...its moment in time. like fine wine, we mature in the lasting impressions each trace adds to our face.

    THE LINES OF WISDOM speak.
     
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    Impressions reflecting stains
    on our faces? Each mark telling
    a story of where we been and what
    we've done is an intriguing expression to
    fathom.

    I love the canvas of your mind!
    BRilliant!

    :heart:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Then I accomplished much with my words Rich, thank you Brother.
    So'ja, I believe, yes, we do wear that imprint of reality, although not as vividly as the picture presented, of course. If our faces did wear those imprints just as boldly, oh the stories they'd tell. Thank you poet.
    Happy you particualrly enjoyed that verse Khasm, and for appreciating the added pic as well. Thank you poet.
    Lines of wisdom...what a thoughtful way to describe this piece, and perhaps...the perfect title. Would you mind if I use "Lines of Wisdom" as the title, Brother baller? Thanks a million.
    Intriguing? So glad you think so Sis Purple, there's just something about that face that made me want to write about it. Wonderful to see you in the poetry forum. Thank you much, you humble me.
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    if "Lines of Wisdom" pleases you...

    ...PLEASE DO. and, THANK YOU for that consideration.