Black Poetry : ?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blakverb, Dec 19, 2001.

  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    soon it will become clear who
    really is criminal / maybe in a dream
    cause the answer lies somewhere in
    everyones subliminal / right beside the
    messages of propaganda slanda
    about malcolm, martin, che, mumia / assata,
    angela / some christian views on the koran and Husia
    about whose God is THE God and
    whose law is the law and who sits at the head
    of the table and who gets the floor
    all this war stuff has me thinking of

    concocted contractions of cranial communication
    that can't/don't/won't create peace
    not in the least

    see it will become wickedly evident to
    those who question and don't swear by the
    information written on crib notes from history
    lessons that the EVIL GENiuS is at work again
    working overtime...working so hard
    got folks thinking everythings okay now
    cause osama's thought to be in a cave
    while gas prices have been fluctuating
    getting on down to the low since the war started
    ...ain't that coincedental? Middle East Middle Oil
    Middle Man...

    anyway it will become evident who is the real criminal
    just wait and see...

    ...when the dust settles and the debris is removed
    and life is perceivde to be normal again and capitalist
    write books about the whole **** process and when it
    begins to seem that more is really less...

    ...wait and see the books by those who are not scared
    to tell the truth those close to the situation that know the situation
    by insider communication bought by a million dollar promise...

    ...i'm not a fatalist just a realist...see we reside in
    a contry that auctions off American men and women
    regularly for the perceived greater good of national
    interests on the regular...what are the cost of american
    civilians? for the perceived GREATER good?

    blakverb "just thinkin'/food for thought"
     
  2. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I wonder if it's the old retired rapper in me or can it be that this piece flowed like Mo'??!!

    ****...I have read it several times now..and each time...it reads me instead!! Forcing my eyes to move side to side...and my tongue to adapt to it's intricate rhythms!!

    A very consciously rhythmic piece 'verb

    *steel-drums*

    :toast:
     
  3. Danilyn

    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Like the old saying, what's done in the dark will eventually come to light. The enemy will be revealed, and when he is, we better be ready. Mad flow, verb.
     
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    twin,

    dipping deep into the cauldron of wisdom i see...

    mad tight scribe...

    one.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man Verb

    lovin ya flow on hit
    tyght scribe as it take me
    to the unknown
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yo

    wrap of a hold at a 47 degree angle
    strangle
    family connection mangled
    psyche all tangled

    who from where 7 centuries a speck
    140,000 B.C.
    from here to eternity
    The Alpha the Omega
    The ALL - The Infinity

    Peace
    DSSNY