Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by watzinaname, Apr 3, 2008.
let it pour , shower me ...Rain down on me
Let it rain like da tropical storm
wow sis rain on rain on that was oh so lovely and endearing
feeling the love here poet
is this anything like "liquid love"
yes this piece brought hope and compassion
and of course i'm feeling that
You making me glow.. see my happy face up there
Unexpected, yet inexplicably inviting
and mysteriously exciting
My lightening strikes would send a surge of love
Electrifying every inch of your frame
While my voice would thunder in echoes
reverberating each syllable of your name
This is so beautiful. I will have to read it again. You flow very nice in this. I was just posting in another post how I find the rain exciting. You see, you know and I know you feel love.
Wow, this made me have a whole new respect for "Rain" ...this piece made me smile so much. I read it twice!!
Thanks for the joy I felt reading it.
LOL @ you So'ja, yes I guess it is like liquid love indeed. Thank you brotha.
When I penned this the love was just flowing out of my pen Hodee. That was quite kind, thank you, always good to "see" you around here.
Making you smile is a good thing queent, thank you for telling me that this piece was able to do so.
This just officially shut down Prince & Purple Rain! "I think the bottom just fell out!" as my grandma used to say. Absolutely Spectacular & Sizzling Piece!
Wow, I am quite humbled Tha-Emissary. Thank you oh so much for your oh so kind words poet!!!
what can i say poet i felt his piece as if it was a part of me
wow wow wow words can not explain the intensity i that overcame me when i read this piece is sweet simple strong beautiful its powerful in a soft but firm way its incrediable its genuis \
grow poet grow
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