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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by watzinaname, Apr 3, 2008.

  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    let it pour , shower me ...Rain down on me
    Let it rain like da tropical storm
     
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    wow sis rain on rain on that was oh so lovely and endearing
     
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    feeling the love here poet

    is this anything like "liquid love"

    lol


    yes this piece brought hope and compassion

    and of course i'm feeling that
     
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    Rain...Rain...Rain...


    You making me glow.. see my happy face up there
    Rain...Rain...Rain...
    :rain:

    Unexpected, yet inexplicably inviting
    and mysteriously exciting​


    My lightening strikes would send a surge of love
    Electrifying every inch of your frame
    While my voice would thunder in echoes
    reverberating each syllable of your name



    Rain...Rain...Rain...​


    Watz
    This is so beautiful. I will have to read it again. You flow very nice in this. I was just posting in another post how I find the rain exciting. You see, you know and I know you feel love.
     
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    Wow, this made me have a whole new respect for "Rain" ...this piece made me smile so much. I read it twice!!
    Thanks for the joy I felt reading it.
     
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    LOL @ you So'ja, yes I guess it is like liquid love indeed. Thank you brotha.
    When I penned this the love was just flowing out of my pen Hodee. That was quite kind, thank you, always good to "see" you around here.
    Making you smile is a good thing queent, thank you for telling me that this piece was able to do so.
     
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    This just officially shut down Prince & Purple Rain! "I think the bottom just fell out!" as my grandma used to say. Absolutely Spectacular & Sizzling Piece!
     
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    Wow, I am quite humbled Tha-Emissary. Thank you oh so much for your oh so kind words poet!!!
     
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    wow

    what can i say poet i felt his piece as if it was a part of me
    wow wow wow words can not explain the intensity i that overcame me when i read this piece is sweet simple strong beautiful its powerful in a soft but firm way its incrediable its genuis \
    grow poet grow