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feeling the love here poet

is this anything like "liquid love"

lol


yes this piece brought hope and compassion

and of course i'm feeling that
 
Rain...Rain...Rain...

watzinaname said:
Rain...

Your words brought me to tears
so if I could
I would return the favor
and rain on you
Surprising your mind with my intensity
just like a winter thunderstorm would do
Unexpected, yet inexplicably inviting
and mysteriously exciting

My tears would purge you
from the fears
of those stormy yesteryears
You'd be caught in a downpour of acceptance
leaving you deliriously drenched
Per chance when I share my life's potion, willingly
You'd drink of me, til your thirst was quenched

Rain...Rain...

I'd draw you a bath of April showers in January
And sprinkle in drops of fragrant rosemary
I'd bathe you gently from your head to your feet
leaving you feeling relaxed
and smelling oh so sweet

My lightening strikes would send a surge of love
Electrifying every inch of your frame
While my voice would thunder in echoes
reverberating each syllable of your name

Rain...Rain...Rain...

Dripping from my torrent of tears
I'd watch you...lying there
Emotionally spent
sopping wet, and bare
From all the love that was meant
in each and every drop that was sent
If I could rain...on...you...

copyright 2006


You making me glow.. see my happy face up there
Rain...Rain...Rain...
:rain:

Unexpected, yet inexplicably inviting
and mysteriously exciting​

My lightening strikes would send a surge of love
Electrifying every inch of your frame
While my voice would thunder in echoes
reverberating each syllable of your name



Rain...Rain...Rain...​

Watz
This is so beautiful. I will have to read it again. You flow very nice in this. I was just posting in another post how I find the rain exciting. You see, you know and I know you feel love.
 

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