Black Poetry : 500 Kisses Away

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by howardtsu, Apr 28, 2007.

  1. howardtsu

    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my bride to be

    solemnly lied to me

    back in the day she cried to me

    that my favorite Lipton iced tea she'd never hide from me

    and she'd always remain tied to me

    so how can happiness be denied to me

    if she's willing to ride to me

    faster than Danica



    love,

    howard
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes destiny returns. Always nice to read you, Howard.
     
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    Prizefighter16 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    what an interesting flow, I liked the way it rhymed, and it was a calm read:welldone:


    keep it going


    Mz.Soulll
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    another awesome flow bruh
     
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    howard:

    Sorry that she lied to you
    when she could have easily
    told you the truth
    But don't let it get you down
    and turn you smile into a frown
    You deserve honesty
    Let her know you will cut her loose
    and replace her with someone
    who will always tell you the truth:)



    Much Luv
     
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