Black Poetry : 5 Senses of Love

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  1. Luv2beluved2

    Luv2beluved2 New Member MEMBER

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    For The Sense of You

    I asked for your presence to be known.
    To be felt with the warmth of my heart

    For the Touch of You
    I denied past hurts, and revealed unhealed scars.
    To be rebuilt with your hands of compassion

    For the Sight of You
    I spanned my sight beyond any natural explanations of you
    To be seen with the eyes of my soul.
    To be revealed with power and supernatural reason

    For The Taste Of You
    I cultivated a desire for you in my mind
    I released all inhibitions to be felt by you.
    I prepared for this journey only my mind could see, and watched my body follow.

    For Me to Hear You
    I undressed the person I became out of chaos.
    I Weakened my defenses.
    I relished in the thought of beautiful beginnings.

    For the Sense of you I asked to know Love .
    For the Gift in you I know Truth
    For the Love of you I asked to know myself better.
    For You I learned to breath fresh air
     
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    welcome welcome welcome !!!!!

    :luv: for da love of emotions flowin :luv:

    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the home u found within a place
    welcome from above as i bless dai scribe some love
    happy u join in as family here this was very nicely done
    felt every line surely da senses will all come together!...... :jumping:

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    welcome!!!!
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    welcome to destee.com

    very enjoyable read...

    hope you share more of your talent with us

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    Ireadastory Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    great drop! I enjoyed the truth in this piece. hard to trust when you've been hurt before. Liked the way this flowed. Flow on!
     
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    ......



    yes welcome.....


    and you came in with a Woeshhh


    this is beautifull....



    Welcome:wave:...






    Loveliberty:heart:
     
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    I must say....this was awwwesome. I totally flowed with u. Nice to have your style and your flow join the fam.
     
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    You wrote the book on love. A sensual sensation!

    WELCOME ~
     
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    Five senses, and we don't want any of them to get hurt in the quest for love. I like the way you flowed with this poet.
     
  9. Luv2beluved2

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    :love: Thank you so much for the Love. I don't have a so called typical style. I just wrote from my heart.
     
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    and a sweet soft heart u pose continue on from da heart!
     
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