Black Poetry : 5:28am 11/7/02

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by BaduX, Nov 13, 2003.

  1. BaduX

    BaduX Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i am awaken by the rain
    that dances @ my window
    cold winds hugs me and my brother.
    I place a cover over him
    5:30 am,
    the rain begins to run
    faster, as if in a hurry and has somewhere to go!
    the dark may have scared
    some of the rain away.
    the rain calms down now!
    its 5:35
    the rain rushes down intensively
    its scared of something
    to be runnin that dam fast.
    the rain air tickles my little brother
    in his sleep.
    keepin the world captive under its spell
    5:50
    i think the rain is fallin asleep,
    i think i should too!
    Good Night!
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    like ya flow here
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    so sweet
    rain drop stop
    souls covered
    ummmmm!!
    nite nite

    very nicely pose'd