Black Poetry : 4Rey

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by emax, Dec 3, 2001.

  1. emax

    emax Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You are my sun, you are my earth
    It seemed not much mattered until your birth

    B4 you, I lived life in a devious way
    and now that your here, All I think about is the next day

    When my life was dark, your eyes gave me a spark
    Now all I see is light and hangin' with you in the park.

    By 23, I thought my soul would be free
    At 31 u got me on the run, and it's all I wanna see
    and no words bring more joy than dad-dy-dad-dy
    Being your father is the only joy I need


    K,P&W
     
  2. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    that first stanza..

    says it all

    welcome to the poetry family :wave:

    pd :)
     
  3. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    NOW!

    that's what I'm talkin'bout...takin' pride in being a father. You and your child are blessed to have one another. :toast: here's to a lifetime of joy

    Madd Holiday Greetings :heart:
    CCBSKYN
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes indeed

    tyght vibe u scribe 4 one begotten love
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    E+Max

    yo dunn
    who can be more
    happier for you
    other than pops

    feeling the love
    for Rey here

    peace from
    Uncle Cap

    DSSNY
     
  6. emax

    emax Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Much appreciation to all of you for taking a moment out of your day to read my work and making another poet feel comfortable.


    Poetic Delight Your work is off the hook

    Rich Your title as "Super Moderator" is well deserved

    cocobutterskyn Sista sista I find your thought process to be deep and always look forward to reading what you drop

    DSSNY What else can I say...I got the ears of understanding, keep droppin'

    Delgado sends reagrds
     
  7. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    :wave: :wave: :wave:

    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    This is such a beautiful peace
    wow ... thank you for sharing it

    I don't know if I've welcomed you already
    see cuz well uuhhh rrrraaa ... it's gitt'n moe and moe harda
    ta keep up ... soze just in case I didn't ... I wantcha ta know
    you iz most very welcome here! Please make yourself at home :)

    We're planning a Birthday Party and want
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    :birthday: :birthday: :birthday:
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    fatherhood...

    a beautiful thing to witness ~ so special the bond that forms between a man and his son.

    I like this very much, thank you!

    a
     
  9. emax

    emax Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    with so many talented people here, I am humbled you both took a moment to read my work. Thank you for the warm welcome:D

    Hope you all have a wonderful holiday

    K,P&W