Black Poetry : ....................

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow great poem. I loved the beinning lines,
    "Just as the physical composition of a tear....
    H20 Sodium Chloride Proteins... is not simple"
    You are so right, you made me think of tears, crying in such a new way, not simple as people say. Lovely write. I loved reading it.
     
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    Hi Sister watzinaname
    My goodness, very tight flow and yes you are so right.
    There is nothing simple about our emotions. It's ours
    and very personal. Sometime the strenght comes from our
    faith. Much love sis. Feeling the deepness in your pen

    Peace~N~Love
     
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    I cherrish every tear I shed,
    cause NO tears will mess up the head.

    Tears we know, cleanse the soul,
    of many things we tend to hold.

    I've shed many tears and didn't know why
    but it was plainly clear of my need to cry.

    I cry when the holiday seasons come,
    the tears somehow start to run.

    I read this piece, I give you your prop!
    cause from it came ...a BIG tear drop​
     
  5. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Its not a simple faze at all

    Its Like manifestation
    Whether fears, love or that sad emotion
    It's Like a once event
    Waiting to happen
    Should never be held back
    It's apart of being free
    Apart of you and me

    Never Simple Sister Watzinaname
    ~peaceandlove~
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you FatnnBeautiful, yes there are many ways to view a tear.
    Yes, we can't deny our emotions, and through faith comes peace. Thank you much Sister Blue.
    Allowing those tears to flow can soothe in the end, thank you Sister queent for your understanding flow.
    A part of being free indeed Platinum. Sometimes you have to just release. Thank you sis.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i love this piece who u displayed it so perfectly
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    watz:
    You have to stop...I have decided I cannot
    click on another piece with your name on it
    today.....you killn' me over here...Your pen is
    on fiyah.... its out of control. :)
    Write after write you keep disecting my life
    my thoughts, my feelings.....I am with queen except
    this piece did not make a tear drop from my eyes,
    I just straight cried. Beautifully Awesome Write

    :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:
     
  9. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for responding so Rich, quite kind of you to say.
    Awww, 4Everluv. Just to think I could have tapped into that part of you, renders me speechless. I think we could all use a great big old hug, and a whole lot of love. Thanks a million sis.
     
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    No Simple Words

    You always blow me away with your concept of things in this complex reality. Keep this gift alive