Black Poetry : ..................

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by watzinaname, May 30, 2007.

  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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  2. abstract219

    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    as usual,
    your words drop softly like rain..
    i love the rhyme scheme and the visuals...it was enchanting, reminding me of moments of slumber, half in, half out...
    really, you need to submit this work...really

    "portal to all this beauty"...that is timeless....
    great write, watz...classic.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this piece took my mind somewhere and let me taste da beauty
    of this timeless treasure while i'm sleep yet awake.....awesome sis
     
  4. Goddess Auset333

    Goddess Auset333 Banned MEMBER

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    Beloved Qg Watzinaname:

    I salute and bow to your words.

    HILY/A
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Even eloquent in your responses abstract, you humble me so, poet, thank you much.
    Well brotha Rich, let your mind continue to roam in it, thank you kindly.
    Thank you sister Goddess Auset for blessing this write.
     
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    & 2 think, i almost missed this.

    how soothingly lovely, how gracefully stylish & w a subtle beauty!

    u kno i'm a succor 4 a tite rhyme scheme, right? this 1 had it all.

    this has become an instant favorite of ur work 4 me.

    this was outstanding work sistah Watzinaname! here's hopein i get 2 hear u do it on the mic som evening. :cool:

     
  7. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    An instant favorite? Surely, you humble me Alkebulan, I thank you very much for such praise.
     
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    Scry'be Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My God! You never cease to amaze me love!
     
  9. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    stop holding back

    you only LIVE once in this LIFE

    and yes you can see the blessings

    dream on

    and let reality enter

    peace and love WATZ

    as always
     
  10. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gee, Scry'be, thank you. I think your art is amazing.
    Yes So'ja, sometimes we need to just do it, and let the fears rest. Thank you brotha.