Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by watzinaname, Aug 22, 2006.
as the sound of our own breathing
lulls us serenely, sweetly,
I smiled a big smile when I read and inhaled this part..
so cozy and warm.
Awesome piece watz...I actually pictured myself being in that cloud ...if only for a moment, thanks for that.
watz this was so smooth and tanderlizing
Allow yourself some extra time on that cloud queent, and I'm happy to know this piece enabled you to feel so serene. Thank you.
Happy to know you enjoyed the flow of it Rich, appreciated.
yes it drip like sweet cream soft and warm i love it.
Now that's a Rich stamp of approval. Thank you brotha poet.
thats was a nice piece
i wish it was longer and went deeper
nice work though watz
Ahh...serenity. You captured the smoothness that is jazz. Loved it!
Watz...that is absolutely beautiful...sensual with out the blatant nastiness...I love the lanquid, loose verbals...very relaxing...liquid...like southern jazz....you captured it.
a phenomenal write.
poet i like to read stuff that takes me "there"
you know what i'm saying
and this here
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