Black Poetry : 401K(she is)

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Like 401k her profolio is strong
    built with many investments u can't go wrong
    profit sharing of sweet sway
    many roads of curves she will display
    she truely a capital gain

    U can't lose by calling her name
    she give u a building retirement fund
    upon wake up as day begun
    her design is deep yet easy to understand
    a life long treasure wit a loyal plan

    For your heart she gives her soul
    In honesty she gives you her gold
    her love is an equity enhanced participation
    vest loyality and she will show caressin cares
    and will stand beside you in all shares

    See 401k of her is a benefit and very beneficiary
    to man mold , her plan is a life agent
    from behind she show you the roll-ova round table
    cross da front list her hot steamy (P) lable

    Believe and trust as u listen
    and she will be classification to all that's missing
    she don't do loans but can build da home
    stay real and she will be a great contribution
    no salary reduction

    Her heart can be automatic limited
    if u not taxable and complete at all rates
    her stocks should never be evaluated
    but obtain in a collective summary of love
    this will enrich your financial status of growth

    She administrate ,examine and bring high welfare
    to a relationship for a huge pension that will last
    Her great beauty and womanly array of delight
    brings us to a powess agreement that you can govern
    she is my 401k whom is accountable
    but never money market her for she will wilt & fold
    :toast:
     
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    Love Your Creativity!
     
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    Thanx my beloved sis you bring creativity strong yaself ........
     
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    Ah. Delightful, imaginative and inventive. A wonderful gift is this piece...complete with marvelous metaphors. The subject in this piece comes full circle. He not only lists the qualities in this woman that he can relate to financial and personal futures securities but he also thinks about the qualities within himself that he knows keeps her wanting to invest. I always try to read the back side of a poem. In this instance I can see that the woman also knows the subject is a great investment, for his love is pure and true. She also knows she has to do her part in keeping his love enriched in the financial status of growth. I truly enjoyed reading this piece. Well done!! (smile)
     
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    Thank you so very much for the beautiful words and love shown me
    as i 401k my life in script
    big ups sistah Queen Totalview
     
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    Now with growth and time
    soon one day she'll be mine
    a safty nest to retire on
    she will be my age long song
    her admired glist of gold
    will be da path to my soul
    401K in depth she be
    that savior queen just fo me.