Black Poetry : 4 THEONE

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by naujae, Nov 9, 2004.

  1. naujae

    naujae Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    baby I haven't dissed you
    I have to take a break
    but I do miss the way you flow to me
    had me doing double take and triple flips
    as your tongue touch my lips
    I didn't know that inside you can roll your tongue
    as you slide over the string on my thongs
    Kissing & touching every part of me
    my door is not lock you know where to find the key
    up against the wall where you pinned me
    taking me up to another place of love
    but I need to take control
    in my mouth your d**k I hold
    up and down licking and sucking like a blow pop
    don't hold back if you need to explode
    on the tip of my tongue is where your cream i hold
    your kindof puzzled trying to find out what i'm going to do with it.
    Hell i'm not going to waste a bit
    did you need to rest as we go again
    HEY THEONE AND I IS ONLY FRIEND
     
  2. plainrhythm

    plainrhythm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ok... very interesting imagery... discriptive..
    well done, nice drop!
     
  3. naujae

    naujae Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank yovery much oh there alway more to cum
     
  4. THEONE

    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Okay now, I see ya,
    Very poetic piece,
    love the imaginery set here. :hot:
     
  5. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dammmn..... somin else... i likes
     
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    hisili Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    r u taking requests 4 pieces? lemme stop mad sensual flow lyk alwayz tyte drop
     
  7. BlatinaPoet4u

    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yo ur poem is really hott. Im feelin the style of ur flow. Keep doin ur [email protected] thing!
     
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