Black Poetry : *4 liviti*

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Elixir, Aug 17, 2001.

  1. Elixir

    Elixir New Member MEMBER

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    Yuckie & Boogie Mango Love, Baby

    **My Wet Request**

    visions of you with no shirt drumming
    meld with images of the African Fire God
    drum warrior and leave me winded
    high strung like an African breeze blowing sand at dusk
    your hands are mud clay cloth painting a tribal image
    on urban paint pails
    a cool blue indigo trance twists
    my dirty mind into a blazing trail
    of physical fantasy
    if I confess I want you, that I
    can't even front on how heavy the frenzy is
    to sex you in the shade of our secret garden
    would you feel me?
    feel me up Original Man and take me there
    free my mind, take a lick
    my honey pot being serviced by your pulsating chocolate stick
    yo, violate this ********
    western etiquette
    fake correctness, **** it and push up on me
    bring me to riverbanks and water falling on herbs
    do me baby in the black night Kongo where
    crickets make freak nasty music
    as we set it off entwined
    in pungent smells of queen mother earth's
    jungle wet
    forced whispers in the thickness, straining in the bush
    the flow increases and tantalizes your third eye, blind
    me to protocol and get animal, Original
    Black man, stay that way, right there, yes
    the only one, drench me with your
    sensual spirit dripping tantric etheric loving
    groping, I get lost in your darkness and swallow it up
    can you save this sister sinner craving and strung out
    on your natural asiatic elixir lust religion?
    getting me high but I will not be damned because of greed
    to ecstasy unfulfilled, salacious visceral fleshy need
    speak to me in the husky lush voice of the Ndoki
    and bless my groves with the sweat swollen edges
    of your native tongue
    sipping from the wicked delicious tip of salvation
    your blackberry juice from a *Guyanese* bone
    hot rod heat seeking to pierce my center
    enter my tender swamp where you are my savior, and I am
    in a missionary position
    when I come, I am resurrected tonight
    deliverance to gritty shores of arched back bliss
    and the frothy waters of my love juice
    mirror my jones to get it on
    tongue you down and ride long and hard
    bucking false traditions
    cause third dates ain't coming before I do
    right now is on point
    as I enjoy this carnal time warp of ancestral
    generation gyration
    back to the dance of Adam
    my Coptic Kushite Adamic Khemetic Original Son of Set
    shockwaves spiral downward to a moist embryonic frolic of Moor

    :love:
     
  2. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    :wave: :wave: :wave:

    Welcome ~ Welcome ~ Welcome

    whew ... hot peace Elixir!

    so glad you chose to share it here
    please make yourself at home

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  3. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    now hold up wait a minute now

    this piece was too steamy


    hot is not the word :lol:


    welcome


    :wave:


    pd
     
  4. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm sorry but someone told me to look at this and i gotta say it's hot
    :flamet::hot:
     
  5. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I simply lack the skilz to express how tight that flow of yours was.
    Lovin all of it.
    you be one bad poet.
     
  6. Elixir

    Elixir New Member MEMBER

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    Just So Cats Know ....

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    One Love