Black Poetry : 4 I AM LIFE

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I am life like days of sun ahead
    full of joy like da breath we wedd
    never tamed or wilt in shame
    a ball of hope a man wit a name

    4 i am life as flowers dat grow
    a rapid radiant that alwayz glow
    i am da windz dat forever blow
    4 seasons we come to know

    I am summer heat u feel
    life's voice da lyrical pill
    a spring drink of cool water
    fully a bid wit body power

    Da winter artic cold like snow
    da path of realism and rage
    life's delima and words on stage
    i am da free mind dat's un-cage

    I am life's fall guy
    a love beyond reasons why
    i am like da birds dat fly
    i am him whom sit up high

    I am life great big pleasure
    something hearts can never meassure
    one who pose a sweet life saver
    a chocolate bar of goodies and flava

    I am da seed of unlimited beauty
    a man a brother never moody
    I am life big smile
    to see me is seeing miles

    I am the road to somewhere
    ride upon me need no fare
    i am what ya eyez now stare
    i am life beyond compare

    I am da feelings of tender care
    all u wish and what u can bare
    i am life dat u wake up to ware
    da mayor of erotic flair
    I am LIFE.

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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your lines were so crisp and filled with beautiful images, such a peaceful flow. Thanks for this. Came back with a flaming pen, flow on.
     
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    Bro $$RICH$$
    I like how this folded out.
    Great flow. Keep it coming
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    this piece was LIFE

    the essence of life on earth

    of which WE are a part of in this living moment

    $$$RICH$$$ this was five star work brethren
     
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    The images of scenery should inspire people to live that life to the fullest, I was feeling this deeply
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thankz family Life we are delt is the life we also choose to be in .....we about to make a change in life
     
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    Life defined so very profoundly...nice flow...great read

    Thanks for sharing
     
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    That was refreshing, optimistic, and inspiring.
     
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    This poem was that of the Beauty you posess
    One of which minds are able to distress
    This was one that caressed the heart of the dear
    And made peace to the waters of our air

    Speak Master poet
    Representing one of the greatest
    And All that you are:)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thank you all family for the loving support on this life of morrow
    hey Plat i'm honored in your grace sis.....
     
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