Black Poetry : 4 Ever (Quick love keystyle)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Legacy21, Mar 9, 2003.

  1. Legacy21

    Legacy21 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Why do you pretend with me?
    When I see the love in your eyes
    Hands touch and you turn away
    I'm standing right here
    Waiting patiently for your confession
    But you would rather run
    Hide behind platonic placidity
    How can I express to you the depths of my heart?
    Every moment you breath spring time into my winter existence
    Your smiles warm my sunshineless shadows
    You are daybreak for my night dwelling soul
    All you have to do is be honest
    Let the words flow from your lips
    I will catch them quickly and never let you fall
    Without the keys to a future filled with certainty
    That you and I can be more than friends
    I tire of playing peek-a-boo games
    Tag you're it
    Freeze
    Because now you're caught
    Tightly ensnared in the web of my soul
    Let go of your reservations
    & let me love you
    Let me love you until the bad memories fade
    & fear is no longer present
    Let me give you joy
    Butterfly kisses
    Soul fusion
    All I ask is that you let me....
    Love u 4ever
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sweet as this surely he would now understand
    love how u worked dis to perfection .......

    if he don't i will ........smiles u go tell the real emotional story
     
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    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love the rawness and the honesty you weave throughout your peaces...you definitely have a unique style...lovin' this..

    K
     
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    4 ever sounds just about right...

    nice

    let the river flow.:)
     
  5. Legacy21

    Legacy21 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :) Thanks for the replies all.
     
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