Black Poetry : 4.7.10

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by NittyGrit, Apr 8, 2010.

  1. NittyGrit

    NittyGrit Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    show & im-prove
    i kiss her early
    i wake her up to grooves
    i sing her sweet somethings
    hoping to better her mood
    (i love you)

    how's that for lyrics
    i've been whispering it with my heart
    hoping you'd hear it

    finally said it out loud
    for the 1st time yesterday
    now i'm out here past the clouds
    decorating ourter-space
    waiting for u to come join me
    but its getting hard to wait
    too many tingles going crazy
    so imma go ahead and say
    I LOVE YOU
    again

    i love you from 1 to 10
    million
    if loving u is wrong
    then i'm smothered in sin

    guilty as charged
    guilty deep in my heart
    guilty for the good times
    and guilty when it gets hard
    guilty in the room
    guilty in the truck
    guilty in an SUV
    turn the music up

    let heaven hear me
    Lord I'm singing my song
    in the key of destiny
    whether i'm right or i'm wrong
    i'm going to enjoy every moment
    all life long
    until she says she's had enough
    or you call the kid home

    i never asked life for much
    God is my witness
    and when its time to pay the price
    i'll just ask him for forgiveness
    until then...there is no limit
    my heart is your's to keep
    instead of asking more of u
    i'll just give u all of me

    play with it
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaa!!
    you broke it down to perfection
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh i really like this so smooth you broke it down and flowed with it nice write fo real!