Black Poetry : 4:47am

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Derrick Jay, Apr 11, 2002.

  1. Derrick Jay

    Derrick Jay Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...moonrise
    she raises her head and kisses the nape of his neck
    "wake up sweetheart", she says softly
    he smiles to himself pretending to still be asleep
    lifting an ear to hear her every move
    she lays her head on his arm
    inhaling her coconut scent he is high
    she touches his shoulders gently
    kneading muscles with loving care
    eyes opening as hormones begin to flow
    in this early hour they know whats in store
    turning slowly he embraces her womaness
    she flashes a smile
    allowing her head to drift down his chest
    past his navel
    to his pulsating joystick
    she grasps his manhood with her right hand
    engulfs him with the heat of her mouth
    sucking intensely he groans with pleasure
    her motion increases as his pace quickens
    he grabs the bed for stability
    eyes rolling back into his head
    shaking from the core he bites down
    trying to hold on
    feeling the brink of quivering madness
    just as she feels the first few drops
    she stops...
    he swallows hard
    wipes away tears
    amazed at the fever of her passion
    she lifts her body
    longing for that deeeeeeeep touch
    crawling up his masculinity
    placing her hands on his chest
    she adjusts her position
    parting lips she sinks his inches deeply
    they gasp at a complete connection
    methodic rocking begins
    dancing to the whir of the ceiling fan
    he clutches her waist
    hips grind harder
    inner rings tighten with each stroke
    head rushes making them cry out
    thighs quaking
    bodies aching for a summit
    rising up he holds her close
    she melts into his arms and shivers
    two motions become one
    gyrating into a spasmic frenzy
    bodies buck wildly
    inaudible voices speak to heaven with frayed tongues
    juices splashing and spurting everywhere
    almost scared at being that carried away
    they fall quietly onto the sheets
    sweet tastes of love resonating
    souls humming
    tucking themselves in
    setting the alarm clock so as not to oversleep
    a final kiss
    wrapped in together breathing easily
    they rest and await morning...
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I just woke up; it's 2:33 where I am.... and here you are, spilling my dreams onto your canvas...

    thank you for this opportunity to re-live the moments...

    beautiful work, Derrick Jay.

    a
     
  3. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    now i know why everybody say you the only person at work who comes in with BIG *** smile in the morning

    feeling the scene dun
    and can't say i haven't experience it a time or two
    peace man

    dssNY
     
  4. poeticdelight

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    what u say DSS

    DJ o-kay nice work

    :)

    pd
     
  5. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you know I never have been one to read dirty books (i prefer the vedeo's) but you about to make me start to read.
    dis was very good
     
  6. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very Tyte!!

    I'm diggin it thoroughly!! OOooooWeee!! Tyte:toast:
     
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    deepgrrl Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mmmmm Thanks for sharing and expressing the vision Derrick.

    "inaudible voices speak to heaven with frayed tongues"...

    Wow. You blew my mind with that line. The energy rushed to my head as I read it. Feeling it much!
     
  8. Derrick Jay

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    whether its early in the morning or late at night, whenever you feel it you know its alright...

    One,
    Derrick Jay
     
  9. Bert

    Bert Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I remember when.

    Thanks Brotha.

    Bert
     
  10. MsBerry_98

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    Derrick... you made my pulse quicken. What a wonderful way to start the day. Thanks!

    Much :heart: