Black Poetry : 3some w/My Pen,Paper & Imagination

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  1. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Simultaneously
    ....We dive in
    and swim
    the depths of
    my imagination
    ....take
    Long, smooth
    gentle strokes
    sure to evoke
    emotional tears
    to flow an ocean
    of vivid imagery

    We whisper
    ....Is this reality?

    I precede
    to tease you
    feed you
    drench you
    in my mental wetness
    dry you with warm caresses

    then....
    begin again,

    cuz....
    I'm not ready
    to end this
    ....YET


    Madd Holiday Greetings :heart:
    CCBSKYN
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ummmm yessss!!

    lovin dis as i sit and move through da mental
    bliss hoping it never end:D
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    don't let it end...

    as i bathe in your mental WETNESS
    get this
    i saw this flow one summer's day
    yet, you penned it yesterday
    MY IMAGINATION
    i saw a portrait you painted
    of us at play
    stroking so gently
    THE PEN AND PAPER RELATION
    i heard the call
    of your falling tear
    but have no fear

    I'M HERE FOR YOU.

    can i have my caress now?:)
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Baller, sending you warm caresses. Thanks for the lovely flo. I love it.


    $RICH$, Thanks for the love, BUT! You still owe me a $RICHmas$ gift. :D :wink:

    Madd Sistahly Love
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    Coco

    now girl you better which yo step
    what you see is what you get
    i'm on my P's & Q's that you can bet
    so i won't write nuffin i might regret


    this was one beautiful piece

    peace
    YNSSD
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So'ja,

    On your P's & Q's....that's funna :laugh: Thanks for the love.

    Madd Sistahly Love
    YLSS :heart:
     
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    yeah! i do

    hey coco i got ya gift but u gotta com' up in flyght
    late one nite ....yeah! dat's ryght late when everybody
    sleep .......:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

    see what u made me do!!!
     
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    Read the title, had me open, had to check it
    went through the content cause I know you reppin'
    Didn't believe I got to the end cause I was lookin' for more.
    This is as beautiful as it is mentally hardcore


    props to you sis


    ;)
     
  9. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Emax, I like that, mentally hardcore. The mind is a powerful tool. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. Thanks :)

    $RICH$, You got it. :wink:


    Madd Sistahly Love
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    the first time

    you spoke of the "3some", I thought, "hmmm, yesssssss, that's it!" Thank you for expanding on this thing we do, in such a beautiful, and sensuous "peace". It is quite an experience, this poetic journey.

    :heart:

    a
     
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