Black Poetry : 3d

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Kitana, Oct 28, 2001.

  1. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love the way you look at me
    with that sparkle in your eyes
    your make-me-melt smile
    that dimple on your cheek
    just drives me crazee

    The way you hold me makes me feel
    like this is the only place
    I ever want to be
    in the warmth of your embrace
    in your arms, forever

    And I'm
    deeply delusional, deeply in love and dying

    I think it's unreal
    how we can always finish
    each others sentences
    and know what the other
    is thinking

    I love our long in-depth
    conversations, the way
    we know each other
    as if we are each other
    and ourselves combined

    And I'm
    deeply delusional, deeply in love and dying

    I'm amazed by your gentleness
    in awe of your beauty
    inside and out
    humbled by your love for me
    honoured by your presence in my life

    I love the way you love me
    touch me, care for me
    I love your attitude to life
    listening to your dreams
    sharing with you

    And I'm
    deeply delusional, deeply in love and dying

    I love your innocence
    in never realising that
    I love you so much more
    than a best friend
    since childhood

    So I'll stay silent and wait
    for you to realise
    that I am your soulmate
    the other half of your heart
    'til then - I'll always be

    Your Best Friend

    (c) nfn 2001
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Kitana

    your words, from a place deep inside, speak of your beautiful soul...

    thank you

    a
     
  3. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WONDERFUL PIECE!

    Excellent piece, wonderful read, indeed!
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    BEST FRIENDS

    in depth of one soul the beauty inside ya heart
    makes us a togetherness forever......beautiful piece.:heart: :kiss: