Black Poetry : ******

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PatriceCQueen, Dec 7, 2005.

  1. PatriceCQueen

    PatriceCQueen Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    F***ked

    I am here … Right here … Right now
    And I am overwhelmed
    With the need to be sexual
    Without boundaries or shame
    The wildest time known

    I am without any part of me
    The parts that have the names to share
    And I D double dare me to cast it all away
    Into a moment of wanting to be totally physical
    In a place I do not exist

    I have disappeared again
    For I am without rhyme and reason
    And the need for this fix
    Is almost like the need for air
    To breathe life into death

    Yet nothing adds up
    Only my body is alive
    Even it is beyond my touch
    And there is no combination to life
    Just get through this moment

    Remember how you did it before
    Go away and make a decision to not come back
    Until you have been punished enough
    Felt enough pain
    Given enough hell to someone
    And you did all it with sex

    There was no heart in it
    The person did not matter
    Even though they were always there
    Never allowed to love you
    To care for a moment
    2190 days later pushed aside for a fantasy

    You learned to walk in invisible shrouds
    Long enough to wake again
    Into a place where you live your moment
    The spectacle of societies expectation
    No one knows when you are not there
    Most times you never even feel the pain
    I want to be there ….. here ….. everywhere I am
    ….
    I must be worth something in the time of tomorrow
    If in the now I would just stop holding my breath

    Patrice C. Queen

    :killpc:
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i enjoyed this piece Ms. Patrice flow on my sista.:spinstar:
     
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    PatriceCQueen Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you NEVAR. People go there and I thought I should acknowledge that.

    I am glad

    patrice
     
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    Oh, Definately a jewel.... as women we go through life thinking that we aren't worthy or worth anything but gurl you do exist and there's no way around it... natural feelings gurl.... Yep, you're normal... this is bout where I am at.... bout ready to burn up for real... I'm waiting in line for that special man so I stopped giving to freely but it's not as easy as you think... go ahead gurl ... i can totally relate to this flow... so real... thanks D.S.
     
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    We just want to feel loved, but sometimes what we are receiving is just temporary fixes for the real thing. Really enjoyed your expression poet, we deserve so much more.
     
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    Go ahead poet
    That was hott
    I realy felt the piece
     
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    PatriceCQueen Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Watzinaname, desert storm, Tantrum - thanks for the love. believe it or not i was scared to post this piece. Fear no more is important. I guess my next level is wisdom and the common sence to use it
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    sounds like you got "rid" of your problem
    but you might need the "24 Hour Notice"

    i feel your pain
    here's a hug poet

    (((((((((((((((((((PatriceCQueen)))))))))))))))))))))))

    just be patient sounds like you have alot of love to give, good things come to those who can bear the wait
     
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    info-moetry STAFF STAFF

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    Beautilfully put together sis...............
     
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    PatriceCQueen Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Info-moetry thankyou for the highlight and love

    peace

    Patrice
     
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