Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Da Street So'ja, Jul 21, 2007.
Round and round we go BRO.
Where it stops...
To what degree the enemy
Will go to jerk our chains
Keep 'em in check as only you can :slingshot
Gotta watch our own backs, while pulling the brother or sister up who needs us, gotta keep up the struggle even when all seems against us, and the cypher just keeps going round. Your pen is smokin, So'ja.
like inside a circle change dat's no ending ....tyte drop so'ja !
360 - Three Hundred and Sixty Degrees
"In the eye of a hurricane surrounded by fallacy"......that is my favorite line Good flow, Bro. Street
Now that was 360° - Three Hundred and Sixty Degrees
of pure truth.
the title of this poem fits the stanzas completely
360 degrees=full circle=chaos=life as most know it
keep ishin' on 'em
I liked the part when you said "a mule with no conscience"
Make it plain.
thank you poet
thank you Poet1 and you do the same (you know check 'em as only you can)
Watz - i'm smokin'? what are you waiting for RING THE ALARM! lol
$$$RICH$$$ - thank you poet
thank you so so much Mizjoice thank you
PurpleMoons - yea i tried i tried lol
i glad you can see bro. Sha'iyn
Thank you DS - i try to keep it simple stuff is complex enough without me
trying to help it along
Got me going in circles of praise to this. As we continue to travel around the axis of plight, your words are ever so steady, thank you.
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