Black Poetry : 360° - Three Hundred and Sixty Degrees

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  1. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    Circle Jerk

    Round and round we go BRO.

    Where it stops...

    NObody knows

    To what degree the enemy

    Will go to jerk our chains :whip:

    Keep 'em in check as only you can :slingshot
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gotta watch our own backs, while pulling the brother or sister up who needs us, gotta keep up the struggle even when all seems against us, and the cypher just keeps going round. Your pen is smokin, So'ja.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    like inside a circle change dat's no ending ....tyte drop so'ja !
     
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    360 - Three Hundred and Sixty Degrees

    "In the eye of a hurricane surrounded by fallacy"......that is my favorite line Good flow, Bro. Street
     
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    Now that was :time: 360° - Three Hundred and Sixty Degrees
    of pure truth.

    ^Brother So'ja!

    :heart:
     
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    nice title

    the title of this poem fits the stanzas completely
    360 degrees=full circle=chaos=life as most know it
    nice droppings
    keep ishin' on 'em

    Sha'iyn
     
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    I liked the part when you said "a mule with no conscience"

    Make it plain.

    Lovely.

    DS
     
  9. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    thank you poet

    thank you Poet1 and you do the same (you know check 'em as only you can)

    Watz - i'm smokin'? what are you waiting for RING THE ALARM! lol

    $$$RICH$$$ - thank you poet

    thank you so so much Mizjoice thank you

    PurpleMoons - yea i tried i tried lol

    i glad you can see bro. Sha'iyn

    Thank you DS - i try to keep it simple stuff is complex enough without me

    trying to help it along
     
  10. Roxanne

    Roxanne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You...

    Got me going in circles of praise to this. As we continue to travel around the axis of plight, your words are ever so steady, thank you.
     
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