Black Short Stories : /

Discussion in 'Short Stories - Authors - Writing' started by GYPSYMAN, Sep 12, 2001.

  1. GYPSYMAN

    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gypsyman

    this is BRILLIANT!

    you've got mail....


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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gypsy

    I'm here reading ... per your request! :kiss: :kiss:
    Gypsy, you've outdone yourself black man! :wink:

    This story is eerie....ok, it's SCARY!!

    I was frightened by the realness that was depicted in each paragraph. It seems as though truthfully, I can witness my own wounded sanity through this slain rationale ...

    There's a distinct calamity that kisses the thoughts that you convey here in this short story... and it stands out -- shouting from underneath the sea of flames -- reeking of "fire & brimstone".

    Your Unique quality comes piercing through! You, dear one, can captivate an audience.

    Keep scribin'... you're really on to something... :kiss:
    Check your pm, I'm sending you a note.

    Much :heart: x 2


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    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gypsy

    You've captured the truth

    the reality/actuality of

    what's really going on.
     
  5. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    now that is quite a spin, very interesting story, well written.