Discussion in 'Short Stories - Authors - Writing' started by GYPSYMAN, Sep 12, 2001.
this is BRILLIANT!
you've got mail....
I'm here reading ... per your request!
Gypsy, you've outdone yourself black man!
This story is eerie....ok, it's SCARY!!
I was frightened by the realness that was depicted in each paragraph. It seems as though truthfully, I can witness my own wounded sanity through this slain rationale ...
There's a distinct calamity that kisses the thoughts that you convey here in this short story... and it stands out -- shouting from underneath the sea of flames -- reeking of "fire & brimstone".
Your Unique quality comes piercing through! You, dear one, can captivate an audience.
Keep scribin'... you're really on to something...
Check your pm, I'm sending you a note.
Much x 2
You've captured the truth
the reality/actuality of
what's really going on.
now that is quite a spin, very interesting story, well written.
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