Black Poetry : ???????????????

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Intrepid, Mar 22, 2005.

  1. Intrepid

    Intrepid Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I will give you my key
    And you may open up my heart
    All my secrets will be revealed to you
    And from there we will never part

    For then you will be my raindrop
    And I will become the sea
    With all your love you have for me and I have for you
    We will live endlessly

    I will give you all my trust
    And you may take my hand
    We will live together as one person
    And our love will rule the land

    For then you will be my sunshine
    And I will be your Earth
    You will give me all the light I need
    And bloom a flower at birth

    I will give you everything
    And by heart we will be together
    And although you're just a fantasy
    I will dream of your face forever

    For then you will be my moon
    And I will be one of those birds
    I will fly to you every night
    And we will exchange our lovely words

    I will give you all you need
    to understand this stupid life
    I will hold you during all your sad times
    And then just maybe ask to be your wife

    For then you will be the rain
    And I will wash away your doubt
    I will flood your world with happiness
    And show you what love is about

    I will give you what you wish for
    And together we will live
    Forever until ending days
    With everything I have to give

    For then you will be my wind
    And you will dance around my soul
    And then you will blow me a kiss
    Leaving my body with chills as a whole

    I will give you the key to my heart
    And cherish you like gold
    I will keep you there forever
    And leave you my key to hold

    For then you will be my coldness
    And I will freeze you night and day
    So that I could admire your beauty
    In almost every possible way​
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Such a beautiful collection of warm images of nature flowing as one together. Lovely piece.
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    the beauty of this has me saying YESSSSSSSS!!!!!!
    flow on lovin the scribe
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was smooth most digging this vibe of sweet love thanks for sharing
     
  5. MADDRAPPER

    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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  7. nabraska

    nabraska Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    in a world of "spoken-word artist", it is good to run across a poet. good post, nice write
     
  8. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What a pretty, pretty piece. I am lovin this.
     
  9. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Each loving line frozen in time... :hearts4:
     
  10. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    truly an endearing scribe...
    your beautiful words took me there...
    keep flowin...

    one love
    khasm