Black Poetry : 3 Stars Graced My Eye

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  1. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Stars are not, :star:
    Just up in the sky,
    Some are on earth,
    I know 3 who's fly,

    SENSUALREALITY
    She's gorgeous,
    She's young,
    She shines,
    Like the sun,
    Like a morning,
    In church,
    She's a melody,
    Beautifully sung,

    MSLUCIOUSB
    She curves like the earth,
    Caramel like gold,
    Long hair, pretty eyes,
    With stories untold,

    DESTEE
    She speaks softly,
    And looks like a queen,
    With a physique unlike,
    Any i've seen,
    Again, she's a star, :star:
    If you know what I mean,

    So the next time I look,
    Up to the sky,
    I'll remember the earth,
    3 stars graced my eye. :star:

    AM :coffee:

    A SPECIAL DEDICATION :grouphug: :grouphug: :grouphug: :grouphug: :grouphug: :grouphug: :grouphug: :star: :star:
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What a beautiful thing to say and write about others...Oh that moved my heart. And I'm sure that you must be a star also...because we reconize our own.
    This is a beautiful poem and I enjoyed reading it very much...thanks for sharing.
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :jumping:
     
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    this was beautiful indeed true starz shinning bright
    loved it sistah A
     
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    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aw I love this not just because my names in it:wink::lol:,but I really like this thank you.....You are a star also :wink:
     
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    THIS IS VERY NICE SISTA!!!!
    I LOVE THE FLOW!!!!










    :coffee:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What a great dedication to these three sisters of the heart. If this made me smile, it'll make them beam.
     
  8. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :)

    Thank u all for the kind responses u've given. I always considered to think about others. It's a good thing. I got nothin but love 4 ya, lol.

    AM:) :luvv:
     
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