Black Short Stories : 3 Minutes

Discussion in 'Short Stories - Authors - Writing' started by me4themind, Apr 28, 2004.

  1. me4themind

    me4themind Member MEMBER

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    I can’t believe this is happening…

    Sweats dripping from my forehead like my own personal April shower. Thoughts are flowing through my head causing my brain to spin out of control. My life flashes before my eyes. The tick tock of the nearby clock ring out like the intensity of a church bell. Tic-one second Toc-two seconds…Tic-three seconds…Toc-four seconds…I’m frozen in time. I can’t escape. It’s too late, I can’t go back. I can’t right the wrongs. I stare and wait. My heart is beating like an African drum in a voodoo ritual. My hearing becomes intensified. The sound of my blood rushing through my arteries and veins like Niagara Falls. Again, I look at the clock one minute pass. The walls are closing in on me, I’m trapped. The room becomes a sauna; it’s hard to breathe. My diaphragm is working overtime. I’m trapped! I can’t move, my legs and arms are restrained. I look at the clock two minutes passed. Time is drawing nearer. How did I end up here? I know, I made the wrong choices! There is no one else to blame but me. Tic-ten seconds… Toc-nine…Tic-eight….Toc-seven…There is fear in my heart. I’m finally able to close my eyes. I begin to pray. The time is drawing nearer…Our father, who art in heaven…

    I open my eyes but the room goes black and the only light I see is…










    NOT PREGNANT!!!
     
  2. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *whew* very scary situation, forreal, i feel u on this one...lovin the story...
    :grin::heart:
    -story
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    a spooky story here whoaaaaaaaaaa!!!!
    bring mo !
     
  4. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your pen seems to be very hot ma. I loved this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
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