Black Poetry : 3 - 2 - 1 Imagination

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  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BEFORE

    A percussion of raindrops
    fell in rhythmic anarchy
    the occasional drip from
    heaven was heard
    as this warmth was
    womb-like
    and I felt comforted
    inside this natural
    element--
    a clutched book
    turning pages
    rising heat
    closing eyelids
    breathing steam
    lowering arms
    into soggy corners
    I had averted the
    drowning of
    someones intellectual
    prop-er-ty
    the rain ceased
    performing its dance
    and silence put
    its fingers in my ears--
    the time had come to
    leave this liquid haven

    AFTER

    3

    2

    1

    imagination


    raindrops.

    rhythmic anarchy.

    paradidling the patio.

    hot bath.

    warm, womb-like.

    a natural element.

    clutched book.

    turning pages.

    rising heat.

    breathing steam.

    closing eyelids.

    lowering arms.

    body jolt

    rocket hand


    imagination

    1

    2

    3


    I'mmmmmmmm baaaaaaacccck!!!!

    relief blushed

    soggy corners

    drowning averted

    intellectual property saved

    the rain abdicated

    silence plugged my ears

    time to dip my toes

    into cold dryness





    (c) 2002 FINDING SO(u)LUTIONS
     
  2. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Girlie...

    ...you are one poet
    that definitely puts
    my mind to work, and
    I appreciate it...:D
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    N2 whatcha doing 2 me

    got me N2 ya soul like wildfire and warm embraces
    taking me from flight dis chilly night...and lovin it as
    u vibe in wisdom ........say it gurl ........ya heard me!!:heart: :kiss:
     
  4. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MapleX

    ...then I must say "thank you" for workin' ya third eye wit me! :D

    Sistah friend, you know you're always welcome!

    Always :heart:

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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey brotha, I thank you for the read! :D


    Always :heart:

    :) :D

    N2
     
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