Black Poetry : 3 0f 4 Holla Back

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thespokesman, Sep 20, 2003.

  1. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Holla back
    This is for my peeps
    My brothers

    I see you, in my shadow, watch you reign over crickets
    Screeching, for what I long for in teaching, peeping over pickets
    Fences, but wood is barbwire, vomiting fire like last dragon
    This flow is saddening, oxy-chemically imbalanced and maddening

    I get you, in silhouettes of figures fighting for civil obedience
    I see injustices on those who trust in this, those chained to the precincts
    This isn’t the past, present tense, but futuristic and recent
    A future for a young child discovering what he eating

    I redeem you, like a receipt, can’t return you
    Rubbery surface on my heart, between my sternum, can’t burn em
    For much strife in life, we earned them
    Repeating the same tracks, un-skipped when we learned them

    I fiend for you, wanted to say you fiend you, but I lean too
    I need a shoulder to lean on, if I stray to coasty shores, who u lean too
    Doesn’t make sense, but it’s a part of me
    I can’t stop here, don’t depart from me
     
  2. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Flowing mad scrip
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ya pen is hot and the sweet ink drippin'
    flow head on poet !!!
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    like the flow...
    keep on
     
  5. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    deep...very deep, keep it flowin'.
     
  6. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    strong dedication my brotha :)
     
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