Black Poetry : 2nd Time Around.

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Khai Tau, Apr 20, 2007.

  1. Khai Tau

    Khai Tau Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'de like to thank you in advance
    You may wonder what I mean
    You see its not just mere chance
    you manifested from my dreams
    3 years ago wasnt our last
    Something else was meant to be
    and while I do remember the past
    Its the future that excitens me
    Back in the day things went fast
    We were young and our ears were green
    I never thought again I'de hold your hand
    But fate is being kind to me
    Girl to women and boy to man
    We stand ready for a new journey
    Ready to give it all I can
    to this new beauty that stands before me
    Changed me, inexplicably this has
    for the better, this soothes my insanity
    feels like you can see thru me like glass
    And for you, I dont mind the transparency
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was a beautiful piece letting one know da heart
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To have that second chance, is a God send, something to cherish. Lovely write, poet.
     
  4. Mark Wilson

    Mark Wilson Active Member MEMBER

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    SPEAKING TO Verbatim

    NICE
    THE END LINE WAS SPACTICULAR

    SINCERLY
    MARK WILSON
     
  5. Prizefighter16

    Prizefighter16 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Off da chain...this poem was straightforward and smooth




    Mz.Soulll
     
  6. IfUComeSoftly

    IfUComeSoftly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i feel you on this poet...


    love gaem me a second go around as well...

    snaps poet... well done:) :)
     
  7. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Feeling You

    On this one.

    That this love brings a perfect union.

    Desert Storm
     
  8. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Such a beautiful scribe.
     
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