Black Poetry : 28 Days

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Randee, Dec 30, 2003.

  1. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I got a new calendar for christmas
    so, I mark (along with birthdays and anniversaries
    for people who will be strangers to me this time next year
    or divorced before the ever celebrate number four)
    a BIG red "P" on my calendar.
    repetitious in such fate
    that it is more likely to come than my
    nosey *** aunt for dinner on the 6th.
    I question if I will ever be blessed
    Two days before nature flows its course
    i feel tired, sick . . .hypocondriac
    wanting to believe i hold magic inside
    wanting to give birth to my pride
    wanting and ready for this love in my heart
    and making room for a child in my soul
    let it happen naturally
    i should just leave it in God's hands
    i should just stopped wanting
    for something so amazing and wonderful
    But, the BIG red "P" circled on my calendar
    reminds me of my fate month after month
    in such a deliberate fashion
    i can do nothing but wait
    for my unwelcomed guest.
     
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    I liked the way you put this together Randee. The sisters in particular can really relate...Peace
     
  3. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    used to be gracious when she arrived
    but, now I want life to thrive
    i want to carry to term
    teach them everything i have learned
    please, let this day come and go
    please be a no-show
     
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    you carry a powerful message in your word randee....this blows my away as iit slwly dawned on me wha ws the subject...flow on:heart:
     
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    this is a tyte piece
    on da natural release...
    aunts are nosey as hell....lol
    one love
    khasm
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well heard sistah i felt all this
    speak on in that powerful tone
     
  7. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks destee gents - thought maybe only the ladies would reply.
     
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    lol........no way was this getting by me
    peace unto u sistah Queen
     
  9. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks everyone, hoping still. what a new years this would be.
     
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    I love this and hope you get what you want this year.
     
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