Black Poetry : ........

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by watzinaname, Jun 25, 2004.

  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    your poem you are
    reminds me of the warmth
    of a love
    that seem to have grown
    in your garden of your heart
    very nice sis
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  3. jazzymoonchild

    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Watz,

    This was so personal, one I could really relate to. It placed a lump right in my chest. This is one of my favorites.
     
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    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was nice, sweet and to the point.............flow on .............one love
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wonderful poem indeed, it seem to have a sorta "calmness" ...from beginning to end. I must say , it caught me. And let me add: Very creatively written.
     
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    :toast:

    Nice write sis I enjoyed it. :peace:
     
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    very nice flowing
    enjoyed the calmness
     
  8. angelicsage

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    Oh my...

    You have such a way with words and

    an unbelievable ability to convey

    the deepest of emotions in the most

    original ways... :toast:

    This was so beautiful...A Work of Art!

    I was truly touched by this flow!


    ooooooooooooo
     
  9. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Glad to know that you could feel that sense of warmth here Blue, thank you.
    Jazzymoonchild, one of your favorites? Wow, thank you so much for telling me so.
    lilcherry76, thank you for the luv on this.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    queentswana it's nice knowing you sensed the calmness, and felt it was creatively written, thank you.
    Thanks for your kind words caramelpython.
    Glad to know you enjoyed this, thanks mzblkangel.
    Thank you for letting me know it touched you so sage, don't know if it was original, but I try sis.