Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by watzinaname, Jun 25, 2004.
your poem you are
reminds me of the warmth
of a love
that seem to have grown
in your garden of your heart
very nice sis
This was so personal, one I could really relate to. It placed a lump right in my chest. This is one of my favorites.
this was nice, sweet and to the point.............flow on .............one love
Wonderful poem indeed, it seem to have a sorta "calmness" ...from beginning to end. I must say , it caught me. And let me add: Very creatively written.
Nice write sis I enjoyed it.
very nice flowing
enjoyed the calmness
You have such a way with words and
an unbelievable ability to convey
the deepest of emotions in the most
This was so beautiful...A Work of Art!
I was truly touched by this flow!
Glad to know that you could feel that sense of warmth here Blue, thank you.
Jazzymoonchild, one of your favorites? Wow, thank you so much for telling me so.
lilcherry76, thank you for the luv on this.
queentswana it's nice knowing you sensed the calmness, and felt it was creatively written, thank you.
Thanks for your kind words caramelpython.
Glad to know you enjoyed this, thanks mzblkangel.
Thank you for letting me know it touched you so sage, don't know if it was original, but I try sis.
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