Black Poetry : ...................

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by watzinaname, Jun 12, 2004.

  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks to all who commented
     
  2. illwillthakid

    illwillthakid Member MEMBER

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    Great Work

    I really enjoyed the way you captured the essence of the way a poet's mind works. Only a poet would understand this and you described it in a way that all would know but only a poet would appreciate. Keep doin' ya thing aiight. Peace!
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for letting me know I hit the target with this poem, illwillthakid. You should know, cause you certainly are that...a poet, that is.
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I know what you're sayin

    in a poet's mind
    the eyes of another are sometimes transparent
    windows to the soul
    nuances are caught and treasured
    smiles are coveted and
    bonds are
    the meaning of life
    in a poet's mind
    the small is the biggest
    miracles are in the subtle
    and the unexpected is
    usually the most special

    :)
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    An excellent work this, scribe on!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte flow feeling all dis here
     
  7. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Loved your flow on this gempis, thank you for that sis.
    1poetsought, thank you for your kind words, they're appreciated.
    Thanks Rich for your support on this and feeling the flow.
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    !!!!

    Deep and awesome flow!!
     
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    flow on poet
    enrich the mind
    help the light shine
    bring that bright smile
    branch out and reach
    past the clouds in the sky
    flow

    this is a lovely poem sis
    Peace~N~Love
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Glad you enjoyed it so caramelpython, thankyou.
    Thankyou for your inspiring response in a flow Bluewater. Nice to "see" ya.