Black Poetry : ...****...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LovelyGoldenOne, Mar 27, 2004.

  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i wrote this after me and my husband had some problems when i was sick...we're happier than ever now...it made us alot stronger...

    i don't
    i won't
    be alone
    no more
    to long
    for our
    love shown
    to be gone
    **** we've
    conceived
    we can't
    receive
    5 years
    raw tears
    lord please
    help me...
    i don't!
    i won't!
    i swear!
    i've cared...
    suffered
    and burned
    been through
    the worst
    i won't
    i won't!
    loose you
    no mo'
    as much
    as i
    need your
    sweet touch
    i need
    your love
    i don't
    i won't...
    can't deny
    your eyes
    to much ****
    we've survived...
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This sounds like the strong words of a survivor, because that is what you are sister. Keep flowing. Peace.
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i likes nice drop
    wishing you
    much happiness
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    need to say more indeed u made this far from strong will and caring love
    wish u two many many years ahead .......i felt ya on this too sistah
     
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    justbnme03 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hmm i hear u sista, uve invested to much, to just let it go, continue to hang it there!
     
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    Too much is invested to just leave it alone. I wish more people would look at what they have been through in past years before they just let it go at the 'drop of a dime'. Really deep.
     
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    keep the flow coming sis
    i am feeling you on this scribe
    nice drop
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    this piece wakes up a memory within. I have been there. Pregnant for the 6th time lost the prev 5 on bedrest or might lose the one I had in me and homeboy could not make it past the crackhouse with the paycheck tofeed me. I had to flee on a plane home to Mom. Baby now 9 healthy and strong. THank God, I am glad you and yours are happy once again. Mine killed what little respect I had left. tUFFY Thank you making me appreciate what I have today compared to the ****e of yesterday. Thank you again :cry: :bawling: :mad:
     
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    thanks for your comments everybody....they were greatly appreciated...
     
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