Black Poetry : 22

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by watzinaname, Dec 11, 2003.

  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thinking of the number 2 twice,
    the day I met you,
    The day the search was over,
    the day when first love was in view.
    The music played,
    we danced,
    my mind was swayed,
    numbers exchanged,
    You called,
    and your voice captured,
    reeled me in,
    enraptured.
    Your touch hypnotized me
    your mind convinced me
    your words assured me
    Thinking of the number 2 twice,
    It was so nice,
    it was...paradise.
    But now, it's over.
    The game has begun again...
    Should I play?
     
  2. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am feelin this, oh yes. very tight
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

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    nice write....interesting........
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    felt da whispers
    heard the thoughts
    release and relax
    yes !
    the game starts now !

    speak on
     
  5. angelicsage

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    captured,
    reeled in,
    enraptured.
    and hypnotized

    .....oh yes, I think I'd be playing again, after all of those feelings
    this was tyte...
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gempis, glad you're feeling this, thanks.
    Mzblkangel, interesting...could be...
    Rich, relax and release...good Rx....I'll speak more.
    Angelicsage, those feelings can be off the hook, huh? Glad you liked.
     
  7. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is a nice scribe
    very nice
    Peace
     
  8. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you bluewater for your words of support
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    continue
    let da heart speak
    release da emotions
    relax da mind
    so it be free
    and speak to me
    flow and glo
    let da pen sho
     
  10. Alpha Male

    Alpha Male Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Re: TO watzinaname

    watzinaname, Play as you never played before
    Player make someone elses heart sore
    Get the benifits that you need
    then toss and cut them like garden weeds
    Great poem indeed!