Black Poetry : .......................

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by watzinaname, Mar 9, 2004.

  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow!!! this here had my mind open
    u pen together a sweet masterful piece
    and i feel it coz i be like dis sometime
    lovin it .....keep flowin
     
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    whoa, get outta my head!

    girl, your last two lines have me captivated. that's exactly what I've been working on lately. had words burning inside me all last week and they wanted to come out through the head, but I held them down cause I wanted them to flow from the heart. this is beautiful.
     
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    Well written

    Your poem was deep. Very well written.
     
  5. illwillthakid

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    Nice iish

    Wats good it's ya boy. Ill Will, just letting you know that your poem was hot. Keep doin ya thing aiight
     
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    watzinaname,
    This is a masterpiece, much felt and enjoyed........



    Peace and Blessings...
     
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    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Simply

    Beautiful...such a nice drop...I really love this :love:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You feel this way sometimes Rich? Shall wonders never cease. Thank you for your kind words.
    Didn't mean to step into your head gempis, lol. Thanks for letting me know you're feeling this.
    I appreciate your compliments Aprofoundman, thank you.
    Glad you're liking this, illwillthakid, thank you.
    Happy to know you enjoyed this Rasheed, thanks.
    Thanks for the props Nita, much appreciated.
     
  9. Quinessential1

    Quinessential1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Flow on young queen.

    Your words describe the sweetest parts of whatever ever was....so continue at warp speed.

    Blessings on ya house!
     
  10. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well, I was young once, Quinessential1, lol. Your response was like poetry to me, thank you so much.