Black Poetry : 2007 I pray for a better year!!!!!!!

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  1. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    2006 its been real
    But its time for you to go

    It has been more downs then up
    I'm so sick of being in a rut

    Lots of disappointments, and lots of hurts
    I'm looking for that someone to pick me up from out of the dirt
    Be willing to give me the shirt

    Off his back
    Is willing when his Queen is down to take up some of the slack

    I pray that my income increase
    I cant lie I have more wants than need
    But Lord if you could I'm upon my knees

    Give me the strength and give me wisdom
    Give me hope, Give me will
    Let not my story be an until

    Let the light shine through
    Let not darkness consume you

    I pray that all my friends recieve whatever their heart desire
    Give us what we really need to help us to inspire

    Others to see your wonderful works
    Lord I'm down to one last nerve

    But I also ask my heavenly Father forgive me for my wrong
    I know you didn't go along

    With what I have/had done
    Your Son

    Sacrifice I appreciate
    I ask my father to remove any heavy burdens upon my plate
    Please Lord I'm begging don't let the evil of this year be next year fate

    For I'm tired of suffering
    Crying
    Sighing
    Loving
    Hating
    Comptemplating

    If this is where I need to be or
    Where I should go
    Show

    Me the way
    For my heavenly Father I will continue to pray
    That

    2007 will be a better year!!!!!!!!


    Copyright 2006
    Nevar​
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's your's for the asking, as everything in life re-produces after it's own...
    Good, follow good, Money, follow money.
    That being the case, I can only see the best in store for you...what you want, you have the power to get.
    Beautiful piece poet
     
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    Hi nevar
    I do feel the prayer in your poem to start "Brand New" when this year comes to an end.
    The thoughts you have shared with US in your poem explains the downs that 2006 have
    brought you, and you're showing the light of 2007. Very positive peace sis

    Peace & Love
     
  4. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Queen thanks for showing me some love

    and to Bluewater how it been i missed my sista. thanks for showing me some love!
     
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    I too pray for better days upon da new year !
    this was so on point sis
     
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    From your mouth to God's ears, Nevar. I hope what you wish for comes true, and may we all have a better 2007. I was nodding my head in agreement as I read this, and I liked the way you laid it down.
     
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    "Oh girl that went through me." That was good sista! You will have a great next year and beyond.

    Be Blessed sista nevar!:love:
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    we need mlk fan smilie for this one...

    i heard it, they heard it... The God heard it and that's what matters most.

    dp.
     
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    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    u gon gurl,..lol...i pray dat 2007 be a better year as well, no lie bout dat
    keep flowin my sista

    blackluv and bp
     
  10. nevar

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    thanks for all that have shown me some love on this piece. greatly appreciated!:kiss: :grouphug: :hearts2: :luvu:
     
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