Quiet Poetry Lounge : 20/20

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by alyce, Apr 18, 2001.

  1. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    let me be the one to
    speak of your eyes
    and how they
    reflect nothing but
    the love
    in you

    let me be the one
    to gaze into them
    in my mind's
    view ~ my inner vision
    of them still
    provides the perfect
    mirrors

    EYE SEE THROUGH


    let me be the one
    to focus your
    attention
    on
    my optical
    conclusions...

    NOT your mistaken
    illusions
    that light
    does not
    originate
    nor could it
    eminate
    from
    the purity
    of
    soul
    deep
    inside
    of
    you


    Alyce, 2001
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sherreeee

    the beautiful thing about the mind's eye, is it is sharper than 20/20 ~ almost like 'hindsight'....but much much MUCH deeper.

    thanks for the response, sis! :)

    :D
     
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    Thandiwe Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's call an Epiphany!!!

    Your mind's eye open, when you wake up to all the things you made dreams of.

    I can relate to this Alyce...;)
     
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    after reading the day's events
    everything is wide open

    hehehe

    loving it Alyce !!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I enjoy reading

    and listening to your soul's symphonies!
     
  6. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanking

    y'all again, for allowing me to share .... my vision.

    :)

    a
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sweet ALYCE love the beat of it
     
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    Much can be seen with the mind's eye, tis true. Tight flow, but what else do we expect from alyce?