Black Poetry : 2 YOUNG 2 B MAMA

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Flyy baby luv, Mar 9, 2004.

  1. Flyy baby luv

    Flyy baby luv Member MEMBER

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    things r really geting crazy,
    your minds going hazy,
    thinking about how u shoulda,
    kept your llegs closed or used a profilactic,
    but u decided to lack it,
    so here u r ,
    16 years old about 2 have a baby,
    should u give it away, throw it away,
    or just pop it out in a society that made u stray,

    now u wanna run away and hope this seed will go away,
    u cry, u hope, and u pray
    but u know this child will b here 2 stay
    because u could never kill or harm a part of u,
    u decide 2 keep it and now your child hool is through,

    so how r u going 2 tell your mom and your baby's daddy,
    will he stay or move 2 another gurl so they can play
    your mom will always b there 4 u,
    but her wrath will come down so hard it will make u physically scard

    now u decide 2 tell your mother,
    and u know u really hurt her
    because the tears that r in her eyes are streaming down like a river
    now your situations a little clearer

    your baby's daddy said he'll stay by your side,
    yet he's never there when u call like his memory of u died
    u strive and try to keep him there to stay but he just drifting away.......

    2 B CONTINUED
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u flowin so smooth and bringing it correct
    pt.2 please ....tyte drop
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Although we know it happens, it is still a heart breaking story, and you tell it well. Waiting for part 2.
     
  4. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So sad but so true...
    feeling your flow.
    very moving piece!
     
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