Black Poetry : 2 STEPS BACK!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticlyspeakin, Sep 23, 2003.

  1. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    they're always
    accusing
    me
    confusing
    you
    blaming me
    for the gaming their unfaithful mates do
    forcing me to feel guilty of false suspicions
    u never wanna hear me out, never wanna listen
    watching
    me
    stalking
    me
    but theyre friends with u
    and not with
    me
    giving u ideas
    planting lies
    tryna walk in ur shoes
    dismantling our ties
    hunting me
    like some got [email protected] hounds
    when u know where i be
    know my stompin grounds

    baby, tell ur friends to back up
    u know im with u and i dont act up
    if i wanted their opinion, id ask 'em
    i know ur a jewel, im not that dumb
    tell ur friends to take 2 STEPS BACK

    when i come home late
    theyre quick to assume
    quick to create
    a prob for me so i gotta sleep in a different room
    and if im so [email protected] T-R-I-F-E
    why they keep their noce in my got [email protected] life??
    i used to cheat
    but now i see no use
    cuz no one can compete
    all they do is lose
    i only sleep in the sheets
    that our bodies continually cruise
    cuz my life is complete
    id never abuse
    cuz what we got it sweet
    like tropical fruits

    baby, tell ur friends to back up
    u know im with u and i dont act up
    if i wanted their opinion, id ask 'em
    i know ur a jewel, im not that dumb
    tell ur friends to take 2 STEPS BACK

    i do me
    while they try to do u
    they just use me
    just to next to u
    or maybe thats not tha case
    maybe theyre just haters
    always in ur face
    callin me a player
    knowing my past mistakes
    to try n bring up later
    spying on my place
    makin up sh*t like an instigator
    baby, theyre just slowin up our pace
    cuz theyre just drama makers
    they bring more tears to ur eyes
    than i do
    now tell me, who lies??
    I cant, even when i try to
    my love and dedication is like
    infiniti time two

    baby, tell ur friends to back up
    u know im with u and i dont act up
    if i wanted their opinion, id ask 'em
    i know ur a jewel, im not that dumb
    tell ur friends to take 2 STEPS BACK!!!
     
  2. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :jumping: :jumping:

    I'm glad ta see u took two steps forward n posted this, supa fly. :cool: ;)
     
  3. poeticlyspeakin

    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank u gempis...
     
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    this is tyte girl...
     
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    this was tight...
    like the flow of it all...
     
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    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    u mastered the rapture and made dem steps to dis scribe
    tyte
     
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