Black Poetry : 2 myself

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by herlove, Apr 10, 2003.

  1. herlove

    herlove Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    keep IT 2 your self ...... self proposed you'll store it upon the shelf that convienced u that you can handle it ...... by yourself ....

    see you knew when u travel the path that lead you astray that soon one day .... some day soon yeah the sun would rise and your secrets would stand before the hottest noon ( day ) and you would drown in its tide and ride your hide raw **** i would have thought u saw ................... it coming

    still u profess and want to stay in this mess..... cause hell what u love him and he loves you ,,,,,,,,

    girl , girl this brotha got you ........ not completly understanding that if he loves u then how the hell can u love 2 ( that is his wife and u ) still u love cause the mf say you r his boo....... and you feel that anything for u he'll do ......

    why not leave her ???????? still slowly u ostrasize those that just might oppose walk carefully ( so u think ) on tippy toes thinking hell nobody knows ..... and if so ....... in this game every thing goes

    all they do is suspect so what if they detect ........ what of it you say : him you will never neglect

    so just keep it 2 yourself and enjoy whatevas left ( over )
    cause that's what for u : that which is thrown out

    shhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh no need to shout
    these r just the thought that YOU think about

    i suggest u just work it out
     
  2. MORE

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    deep, i think i got it, yep. good one
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    work it out
    trying to love 2 sho ain't easy to do
    keep it to one self
    work it out !!!!!!

    u gave a directional claws
    will she hear
    will she be blind
    only in due tyme will tell....
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Keepin stuff to yo self is sometimes NOT the answer,
    like a all A student turned into a dancer.
    But as you keep this secret you enjoy yo love,
    keep it to yo self but get help from above. :) ;)

    loved yo poem sad but real keep flowin!!!-----serenti
     
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    Deep! Im feeling it. but sometimes its best to share things with others
     
  6. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You hit the head on the nail right there for me! My friends need to read your poetry instead of askin me for adivce. Deep and beautiful girl keep it up
     
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