Black Poetry : 2 mo' - But & Except

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by deepy, Jul 14, 2004.

  1. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Some of us forget - so busy struggling
    doing "the thang"
    Forgetting.

    maybe we don't mean to
    BUT
    we forget:
    IT'S ABOUT KEEPING LINKS CONNECTED!

    *******


    people don't think i know
    who they are
    they don't think
    or don't see...I know who they are
    I accept a lot
    EXCEPT
    I know....We
    Are Same!






    all deepy's pieces copywrit...
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    In all that is most important, we are the same, no ifs ands or buts. I hear you deepy, flow on.
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very touching drop and felt speak on i'm listening sistah
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    likes this drop
    flow head on...
    Peace
    Angel
     
  5. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    that is the key watz...we are the same... thanks for "getting" it...i believe you do..
    rich...glad you got the emotion..if was that when i wrote it...thanks
    mzblkangel...thanks for your encouragement also..
    blessings on all of you.
     
  6. 7thPoet

    7thPoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    well crafted

    I accept a lot
    EXCEPT
    I know....We
    Are Same!


    this was crafted nicely and was thought provoking...
    you are really deep
    fo real...
     
  7. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    thanks 7th
    so are you...deep that is...
     
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    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I hear you Deepy! This drop was short and sweet.
     
  9. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    your work is always so "cleverly crafted"

    thanks for the positive reminder

    because we do forget sometimes...

    "we are the same"...
     
  10. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Simple, true and to the point, baby. Keep on flowin.
     
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