Black Poetry : 2 FATHERS TO WATCH OVER ME

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  1. cursed heart

    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    2 FATHERS TO WATCH OVER ME



    Born into your cradled arms
    Your smile embraced me
    You erased all the harm
    With the knowledge you’ve instilled in me
    Father you completed me with the nourishment from your heart
    When my soul was empty

    I can see treasured memories of us when I close my eyes to dream
    And I can still hear your voice praying with me

    “Baby girl reach out and grab my hand
    Whatever you need in this life
    Whatever triumphs that may come your way and you just don’t understand”
    Ask Daddy whatever you wish
    And I’ll answer you through the light of God’s plan
    For Daddy promised you that you’ll never walk alone
    2 fathers
    2 foot steps in the sand
     
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    ibrahim Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice.
    I like your style.
     
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    this is heartfelt flow on my sista!!!!!!!!:kiss1:
     
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    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Ibrahim and Nevar:kiss1: :kiss1:
     
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    Perfect Poem
    That was touching poet
    I loved this for real
     
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    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :love: Thank you Tantrum:love:
     
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    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    beautiful......finally, a poem praising good fathers.......thank you cursed heart.

    i get tired sometimes of all the sexing and romacing here.....finally it's good to see another subject.
     
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    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :kiss1: Thank you abstract219 I appreciate that, much love boo:kiss1:
     
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    i had to go back and look for this one sister :) because I remembered that it had a special place in my heart... I have had some of the worst luck when it came to Fathers. But I think its safe to say that my Heavenly father is who came through for me and caressed me and this piece/peace reminded me of that. Thank you
     
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    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sorry so late but thankyou gurl:pool:
     
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