Quiet Poetry Lounge : 2 Deep 4 Thee (An Adult Poem)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by oldsoul, Sep 18, 2004.

  1. OldSoul

    OldSoul Permanent Black Man PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Because it is an extremely erotic poem, do not click to 2 Deep 4 Thee unless you are an adult. If you are not an adult, then you should leave this page immediately. If you are an adult but do not wish to view a highly evocative, possibly pornographic poem, please leave this page immediately. Whatever you do, do not click on the link to 2 Deep 4 Thee. If you are an adult woman, in an intimate relationship with someone, I recommend that you do not read 2 Deep 4 Thee and that you leave the page immediately. And Men, there is nothing at that link for you. If you are an unattached, adult woman and feeling a little freaky, read it at your own risk. Be aware, however, that once you read it, a part of you will belong to me willingly, forever, as I, you. The following is a link to 2 Deep 4 Thee (An Adult Poem).
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    eroticly extremely deep !
    as an explosive extreme writter i am this was awesome !
     
  3. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    Yes ... willingly ... forever ... :blush:

    uuhhh ... skuze me ... but ... uhhh raaa ... is this my Teacher ... :teach: ... Brother OldSoul?! :eeek:

    class will never be the same again! :love:

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  4. watzinaname

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    Alrighty then...The disclaimer was necessary, although I think even if you're an attached female, or a male, there is something for them in that this scribe was posed amazingly well. I'm with Destee though, for a while I'm going to have a little smirk on my face whenever I see the name oldsoul...tee hee....Well written brotha, well written.
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :jawdrop: wheeew ok din this was extreme theme :grin: wheeew :blush:

    :smokin: i likes..... :spinstar:
     
  6. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    old soul...
    old soul...tis clear this old soul knows what to do
    and how to erotically and creatively describe what to do..
    very...very..nice...and I ignored the disclaimers..
    :rolling: :bowdown: :hot:
     
  7. CarrieMonet

    CarrieMonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like erotic poetry. Thanks for sharing the link. Very HOTT work!
     
  8. Kori

    Kori Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    All I can say is Woah!!! That was hot. Very descriptive.
     
  9. jazzymoonchild

    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :jawdrop: Brother OldSoul!!!!!!!!!! I think I'm in love!

    This was incredible. The disclaimer was indeed necessary
     
  10. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    why brotha oldsoul...:eeek: :blush: :read: IS THAT BROTHA OLDSOUL??? o my :jawdrop: i really dont know what to say :look: :hot: wow lol
     
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